Pitch Feedback


After my pitch I read through the feedback I had been given, these were the main aspects of the pros and cons:


  • Realisation early on that my initial idea was too complex and have changed it slightly.
  • Good character development.
  • Good idea using the negative space colour change.


  • To provide an animatic as a visual aid.
  • Images of storyboard instead of the sketchbook – adds a style.
  • How will you achieve the negative space colour change?

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