After my pitch I read through the feedback I had been given, these were the main aspects of the pros and cons:
- Realisation early on that my initial idea was too complex and have changed it slightly.
- Good character development.
- Good idea using the negative space colour change.
- To provide an animatic as a visual aid.
- Images of storyboard instead of the sketchbook – adds a style.
- How will you achieve the negative space colour change?